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Re: Remember His Name
I agree with Sam, this was almost like poetry and it was ironic in a way. Like I said to somebody before Irony is good to use in stories. I ...
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Re: Crazy Little Thing I
I don't think I've read any of your work Areida and I'm so mad that I haven't this was brilliant. I find myself intrigued by Connor and Jo I think ...
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Re: A Tracing of Angels
Hey Jig!! I really loved this piece its weird but at the same time you feel happy!=) Well anyways this wasn't confusing at all because I kinda figured he was ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Death by Scotch
You might be confused if you read this first so go back and read Pieces of Wooden Glass. [img] [/img] Death by Scotch By Angel of Death Col-3 Years Later ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Pieces of Wooden Glass
I don't know if I'll write more, it was kind of a thing that I had to get out of mind but I'll think about it. Thanks :D :D
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Pieces of Wooden Glass
Pieces of Wooden Glass By Angel of Death His lips were stained with the devil's sweet blood. ^ Outside the door, music blasted against the walls, giving birth to a ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Swapping Your Blood with Formaldehyde (Part 1 and 2)
Kylan have I ever told you how amazingly incredible you are? No, I haven't? Well I'm telling you now. You are amazingly incredible. I mean, I agree with Suzanne, this ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Lover's Knot
Oh my gosh this was so beautiful I think I might cry. Its absolutely lovely how you made a scene inside a poem, almost like a part in a romantic ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Collin's Book
Hey Leah, I haven't read any of your writing in a long time but I love this. Although I kinda figured Jack was gay along time ago, the last line ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: ~Michelangelo's Night and Day~Chapter One
I only got half-way through this, but I do agree separating chapters is so annoying, well anyways your imagery is amazing, and your figurative language is totally exceptional. The way ...
Jun 9, 2008 -
Re: Love at First Bite
Lily I congratulate you!! I'm on my like 6,00th book and I can't figure out how to start it even though I really am dying to write it. Your plot ...
Jun 6, 2008 -
Re: Her Eyes
Hello, I haven't seen you around, well welcome to YWS. This poem said a lot about how attuned you were with this girls eyes but you lack depth. Add so ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: First chance at Forever
First Chance at Forever By Angel of Death A crowd of dark eyes stared at me, boring through my soul like sun rays breaking through dawn. I gripped my sword ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: The Host
I just bought The Host today, can't wait to read it!!
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Think
You are an excellent writer, Rory! I was pulled in when I started reading and the title is so simple but it makes you wonder. Your characters are lovely, this ...
May 23, 2008
